This text should be very noticeable (separate, short paragraph).
DO NOT USE the exact words which appear below. Keep the meaning, but use somewhat different words.
- Ideally, this text will be something like: “According to our Company’s executive staffing plan for the next 5 years, Danny will be appointed the Company’s XXX in the YYY Division in August 2028.”
- Another ideal formulation:
“Our Company offered Danny the position of XXX in the YYY Division and he accepted the offer.” - A weaker version than this:
“Upon his MBA graduation, Danny will be appointed the Company’s XXX.” - An even weaker version than the above:
“Our company is planning to appoint Danny as its XXX in August 2028”. - An even weaker version than the above:
“I am planning to appoint Danny as the company’s XXX in August 2028”. - An even weaker than the above:
“The Company will be happy to have Danny become the XXX after his graduation”.